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Writing Lesson 1

Good Morning everyone. We are now going to start writing our Traction Man story. I am going to post videos to explain what you need to do. Here are the first three videos which complete Lesson 1. We are writing 3 sentences which build up our opening paragraph. 

Please watch each video one at a time and do the work for each. You need to add vocabulary to my lists and then use that vocabulary and my sentence structure to write your own sentences. Please send/post pictures of your sentences or email me them so I can gather them all together to create an amazing piece of writing.


Sentence 1 - Action Sentence (describes the boy opening the box)

Sentence 2 - Notice Sentence (describes what the toy looked like)

Sentence 3 - Feeling Sentence (describes how Traction Man felt in this new place).


I look forward to seeing your amazing writing. 

Opening sentence

Plot Point 1 - opening sentence. An action sentence to describe the boy opening his present.

Sentence 2

This is our second sentence for this opening paragraph. It is a notice sentence to describe what Traction Man looks like.

Sentence 3

Our final sentence for the opening paragraph. This is a feeling sentence to describe how Traction Man feels about being in this new place.